One of your friends ask you to be a partner in his new business. write a letter to reply him: - give your opinion about your friend's business idea - tell him weather or not you have decided to accept his offer - and explain your reason for this decision
Dear Nina,
I have seen the letter
last
week. When I read the letter I was really happy.
Your ideas are good but you do not find any money. I do not enough
money for your ideas.
Add a missing verb
have enough
This
is a good plan for us because we are good friends and we are good understanding for us.
This
business
is complicated for communication for example
we have good relationships but this
business
will destroy our relationships.
I do not want to lose your friendship because you are very important to me.
If I have enough money again I do not accept your ideas because I really like you.
If you want another partner I will find one for you. I recently saw my colleague research trusted
person for the Correct article usage
a trusted
business
. In my opinion, your good understanding of business
.
I hope you will achieve great success in your business
life.
Best regards,Submitted by kubrairmak287 on
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task achievement
Consider expanding on why you find the business idea good but financially challenging. Perhaps mention specific aspects of the idea you find appealing.
coherence cohesion
Try to use more connectors and transition words to improve the logical flow of your ideas.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which gives it a formal tone.
task achievement
The writer's genuine concern for the friendship is clearly expressed, which is a strong aspect of the letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.
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