Letter of recommendation for scholarship application

It is my pleasure for me to recommend Sri
Hernita
Correct your spelling
Hernia
Barus for her application to Chevening
Scholarship
. She is an active volunteer in the NGO, called Sahabat Anak.
This
organisation
is focusing on the fulfilment of
children
’s rights, especially in rural areas. As a Program Director in
this
organisation
, I knew her as one of the committed
volunteers
. She kept her commitment to work on the
organisation
voluntarily since 2016. She took several responsibilities from the
children
’s tutor, Fundraiser team, and
Scholarship
Coordinator for two years. Despite working as a full-time Accountant, she could be a strong and dedicated volunteer for several years. She demonstrated her spirit and showed a strong passion for
children
education
in the rural areas. She has shown her initiative and perseverance in supporting the
organisation
programs, especially in the advocacy program for underprivileged and stateless
children
– who do not have birth certificates. There were some obstacles to running the program,
such
as limited time, volunteer availability and lack of knowledge about advocacy bureaucracy and administration procedures.
However
, she demonstrated her urge and effort to stay connected to the
organisation
’s committee and has worked together with the other
volunteers
for several years. It proves that she has a strong interest in
education
inclusion and commitment to drive changes in complex social issues. One of the most significant cases was when she – together with other
volunteers
– tried to help some
children
and registered them into a formal school. They had no birth certificate, and their parents did not know if it was necessary. Together with the other
volunteers
, she approached the
children
’s parents and persuaded them to support their
children
’s
education
. Long story short, their parents allowed the
children
to go to school. She
also
handled the coordination with other parties,
such
as the school’s committee and donors, to accelerate the registration process and ensure the availability of
scholarship
funds. Currently, there are two kids who are already in their fifth grade of elementary school with continuous support from organizations.
This
is a good example where she could prove her leadership capacity with good execution and initiative. She
also
has strong motivation and the ability to engage and work together with others. I have no hesitation in recommending her to be accepted at Chevening
scholarship
as the bridge to pursue her aspirations. I believe she would be a valuable asset both for the
scholarship
network and Indonesia’s development in the near future, especially in the
education
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