Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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The debate around whether going to untouched places,
such
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as Antarctica or the Sahara desert, could be beneficial for
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has raged on recently.
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essay delves into both merits and demerits of
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phenomenon and provides logical reasons before drawing a conclusion. On the one hand, travelling to
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places where a few
tourists
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have been there could be advantageous for visitors.
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, these
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foster a sense of achievement in individuals.
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, there is an intimate link between the trip and their self-image which can be considered one of the most important
people
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's values, So gradually the
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self-confidence will increase.
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, not only do these
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enlarge the visitor's knowledge and broaden their horizons but
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thanks to the latest technologies like professional cameras, individuals could take a photo or make a documentary from their
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.
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, magazines the National Geographic always purchase these photos and videos at high prices.
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,
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these
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are so delightful, they would have numerous problems for
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. The
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and foremost is being risk-involved. since
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face many unpredictable situations like breaking the ice in Antarctica and there is not any good hospital there, the rate of casualties and mortality is so high. According to a statistic which has published by the New York Times newspaper, approximately 20 per cent of
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who experience difficult
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die annually.
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, going on these
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is not that much convenient, because there are not
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hotels or other accommodation facilities, as well as, due to the lack of transportation systems there,
people
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are forced to go on foot. Having taken all into consideration, adventurous
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have both advantages and bad points. The upside is getting familiar with new places and making money.
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, the downside stemmed from the risk which is an indispensable part of these
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • basic amenities
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