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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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With the technology advancement,it's become easy to abort a child without any serious risk to the pregnant lady.
Therefore
, most people thought the government should pass an act supporting abortion, whereas others do not want it to act as legal in society. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both of these views and
also
 provide my own point of view on
this
 topic. There are ample reasons why community support that miscarriage should be legal,
first
 of all, it reduces the stress from a woman mind who do not want to take responsibility for the
baby
 at an early age. Because she
also
 has some dreams to achieve in her
life
.
Moreover
, pregnancy could be the result of rape,
this
 could end up the
life
 of a female because nobody will support her with
this
 condition. So, she has only one solution to terminate the pregnancy and live her
life
 as she wants to be.
On the other hand
, many of us are against
this
 because we think abortion will kill human beings who do not take birth in the world.
Furthermore
, sometimes families take
this
 action because they do not want to have a girl as a
baby
 in their home
instead
 of having a
baby
 boy. As a consequence, the number of women is less than as compared to a number of men in most of the countries,like,India. According to my perspective, I think if there is any serious issue related to a mother's
life
then
 they should take
this
 step
otherwise
 not. Because
this
also
 hurts me whenever I saw the body of any
baby
 girl on the roads or rubbish bin.
This
 makes everyone cry and thinks about
this
 matter.
Additionally
, the government should
also
 take a good decision about it. They should allow that person who is facing any difficulty regarding pregnancy. In conclusion, the cases of miscarriage increasing day by day and becomes a most controversial and debatable topic. Most public support
this
 and think it should be legal, whereas some are not.
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