Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter Describe the situation Explain the problem it is causing you Offer at least one solution

Dear Mandy, I am writing
this
letter ,
Firstly
,to bring in your kind knowledge that, It's been almost a month , We are Experiencing loud acoustics sounds every night by your backyard area.Since Our neighbourhood and togetherness are 20 years long,Though,my wife fought coupled of times,She forced me to ring your bell in the middle of the night, But I controlled and decided to write rather than fight .
However
, having Party at home is not an issue,
Although
I understand,enjoyment is being a part of your lifestyle.
Secondly
,Even though, I and my wife have a severe migraine issue,
Hence
, Doctor instructed us to take proper sleep.Despite,waking up fresh in the morning, The high sound triggers our pain and we could not sleep.
Instead
, We keep awake on daily basis,which not only worsens our health but
also
compromises our Professional life by not giving our hundred per cent.
Moreover
, I am afraid
this
could lead our relationship on a weaker side, and you know for sure both of us never wanted
this
to happened.
However
, I have a solution to
this
matter , If you keep your parties inside your Hall area rather than in the garden the noise will not echo.
Finally
,try to wind up before 10 PM.In
this
,way we could
also
sleep well and you may be able to have Best Wishes ZF
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