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No doubt business is done mainly to earn profit but some business ethics should be kept in mind what do you think today is today's businessman ethical in his practices ?

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Presently , the prime motive of
business
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 is to generate profit,
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; a code of conduct should be followed. I believe that few
businessmen
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 are following the ethics whereas others are not. Commencing with, transparency is the main concern of
customers
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 nowadays. For attaining success in the
business
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 today's
customers
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 can not be ignored. To quote an instance, in case of any fraud,
customers
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 post the incident on any social platform like Twitter, Instagram etcetera which
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 creates obstacles in the flourishment of the
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 ;
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 why businesses have to consider the demands of their
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 .
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 , the surveillance system of government is top-notch. One can not make fool of people since if one is being caught doing cheating
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 a penalty has to be paid for compensation of fraud .
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 , there is immense pressure of competition in the market. To deal with that, few
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 provide good quality products at affordable prices. For compensating the expenses they become part of tax evasion. Owing to
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, every individual would not take benefits which are provided to them by using taxes amount.
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 for taking a position in the market, businesses have to be practical and professional due to which the emotions of
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 are being neglected.
Customers
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 demands should be fulfilled in every respect of their demands but few
businessmen
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 do not follow
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 fact as they think practically which leads to the dissatisfaction of the
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 . Conclusively for profit maximisation, some
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 show deceit in their
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 practices , which works only for short period ,
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, in my ,opinion ethics should be followed for flourishment of the
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