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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country . Others say that these are not the only reasons ehy somrone should learn a foreign language Discuss both these views and give your own opini

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Some populations believe that the only reason for learning
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 is in order to they want to travel or get a
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 overseas.
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 argued that there are so many reasons that individuals want to learn foreign accents. I completely agree with
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 statement. Nowadays, it can be seen that around the world globalization companies have been increased significantly because of that they are some demanding
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. So
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 who want to professional
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 ought to learn that
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 they need and travel to other countries to get their
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 other
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 want to travel other countries for leisure so they need to know a basic about local
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 because they want to communicate with the resident.
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, when they do not know the address and ask about attractive places ,
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, they have to speak with native speakers or folks.
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, there are other reasons that individuals want to learn the
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. Some
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 like learning foreign accents since they want to study academic subjects.
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, in some developed countries
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 as Uk and Australia when you want to apply for the study you need a certificate
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 a just increase their knowledge about other cultures or general knowledge. In conclusion,
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, many
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 learn a
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 for getting
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 oversea or for travelling.
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, there are other reasons that are purely personal and recreational.
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