Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems.

#people #times #loss #species #plants #animals

Some people say that are significant concerns that affect the climate. From my point of view, I thought that everything is connected which are the destroyed plants and killing animals,

thus

I think everything around us is equally essential. Nowadays, people are dominating animals by selling their skins or tooth to get an enjoying their life. These reasons are surviving to their life, which is having the relationship permanent.

Moreover

this

thing

also

happens with some predators, if they are having starving, the predators are dying, because their preys are the most significant factor of their survival.

For instance

, tigers are not able to live without dear, and dear are unable to live without glasses. So, if humans burnt the grass fields, dear is definitely going to die, that's why because humans

also

need food in order to live.

Furthermore

, nothing can live without water and

oxygen

as breath for living, when the

oxygen

is less and lower from the habitat to breathe for living, that means other factors except many zoos and plants are

also

important. The

oxygen

in the air, we can not live without it. So, that's why the carbon dioxide increased in the earth, and

oxygen

is essential to living.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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