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Some people believe that children should be taught how to manage money at school. Do you agree or disagree?

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Learning at an early age has a great impact on people's future knowledge and thoughts, so a certain group of the population argues that education
centers
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 should include some additional subjects to the early stages of learning
such
 as how to control your expenses.
This
 essay will express their ideas despite that the exact opposite is true. expenditure management is an important aspect
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 life that enforces building the society in various scales, so if
this
 topic is taught at the primary schools it will definitely have a positive reflection on and will flourish countries economy to a fair extent.
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, if we teach the children how to manage and control their expenses and priorities their needs, we will develop a smart generation with smart economical thinking and are financially oriented. I believe that education
centers
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 should not add
this
 type of
subject
 to their curriculum because there are more important subjects to learn than managing money.
In addition
, people's needs differ from each family income and their type of life so there are no general concepts to be learned for
this
subject
. To conclude, Managing and controlling expenses is a vital
subject
.
However
, it shouldn't be a
subject
 in schools and it can be learned in private courses.
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