A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice

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Dear Alex, I hope

this

letter finds you well as I got very concerned after your

last

letter which says you are finding it very hard to adjust to a new school.

Firstly

, I would suggest you should give yourself some time and try to make some friends. Start by befriending your benchmate. I am sure in no time you will have lots of new friends. Trust me, it is just a matter of time.

Moreover

, how about joining your school's Volleyball team as I clearly remember your passion for the game. And take part in debate or speech competitions as you used to do in your previous school. All these curricular activities would give you the opportunity to know other students.

However

, making friends is a slow process and I would recommend you to be open to conversations. And leave the past behind and try focussing on the present. I will see you when you come to visit your grandparents which I hope will be soon. If by chance you need somebody to talk to I am always here for you. Best wishes, Simran

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coherence cohesion

Consider breaking up longer sentences into shorter ones to enhance clarity.

task achievement

The letter addresses all parts of the task, providing concrete suggestions and supportive advice to help the friend adjust to the new school.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is appropriate and friendly, fitting well with the context of writing to a friend who needs advice.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph focuses on a distinct idea, making the letter coherent and easy to follow.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

185 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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