Some people think that illegal internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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has become
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of entertainment as it is common these days to download from
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. Some
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believe
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effect on the whole
music
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industry while
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others
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argues that
artists'
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artists first
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priority is to become popular through
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viral songs. In my opinion, financial
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to the company may lead to
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bankrupt
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. So I agree with the
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group, who are against illegal uploads. On the one side,
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spend
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a lot
of money to hire artists, models,
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and musicians. Apart from
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, they
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pay to promote their album to get a good deal of profit.
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, illegal download from the internet would not be profitable for the company.
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, it may not be able to invest
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more tracks after
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a great loss.
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, some argue that
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singers do not affect by these minor
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losses
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because they earn from
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other sources
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such
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as advertisements,
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and through many apps. So, they just need
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popularity despite
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having a big bag of money.there are many tracks which viral on the reels before posting to the
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.
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, many people
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the artist on the apps and make them famous. To conclude,
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to recreate themselves through a pricy of
music
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could put bad effects on the income of the
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creators
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music
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a music
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album
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albums
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for tackle
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issue the download of the
music
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should be through the original links only.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • illegal downloads
  • financial losses
  • record labels
  • decrease in sales
  • perception
  • undermine
  • upcoming artists
  • pirated
  • exposure
  • concert attendance
  • merchandise sales
  • alternative revenue streams
  • live performances
  • sponsorships
  • streaming platforms
  • business models
  • loyal fan base
  • adapt
  • mitigate
  • thrive
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