Some people think that illegal internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Music

has become

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of entertainment as it is common these days to download from

internet

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the internet

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. Some

beleive

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believe

it puts

great

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a great

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effect on the whole

music

industry while

other

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others

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argues that

artists'

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artists first

first

priority is to become popular through

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viral songs. In my opinion, financial

lose

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to the company may lead to

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bankrupt

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. So I agree with the

first

group, who are against illegal uploads. On the one side,

Producer

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Producers

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spend

alot

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a lot

of money to hire artists, models,

composer

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composers

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and musicians. Apart from

this

, they

also

pay to promote their album to get a good deal of profit.

However

, illegal download from the internet would not be profitable for the company.

Hence

, it may not be able to invest

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the

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more tracks after

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a great loss.

On the other hand

, some argue that

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singers do not affect by these minor

loss

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losses

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because they earn from

another source

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other sources

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such

as advertisements,

modeling

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modelling

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and through many apps. So, they just need

of

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popularity despite

of

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having a big bag of money.there are many tracks which viral on the reels before posting to the

televisions

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.

As a result

, many people

follows

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the artist on the apps and make them famous. To conclude,

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the idea

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to recreate themselves through a pricy of

music

could put bad effects on the income of the

creaters

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creators

creator

of

music

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a music

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album

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albums

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for tackle

this

issue the download of the

music

should be through the original links only.