Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter in order to kindly ask for an exemption in the requirements of one of your courses, which is Data Analysis.

To begin

with, I would like to point out that

although

I have never taken any formal computing

course

, I have been studying data analysis and several programming languages since I left high school.

In addition

, I have a great ability with Excell and other computer tools.

However

, due to the obligation of helping my family in our business, I did have the possibility to take any

course

Finally

, as the Data Analysis

course

demands that a previous elementary

course

should have been taken before attending it, I would kindly ask for a special exception in

this

case. Due to the circumstances mentioned above, I have shown to have a good background regarding the topic of study. I look forward to your response regarding

this

issue. Yours faithfully, Christina Smith

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