Some people think new homes need to be built with private outdoor space such as a garden, yard, or balcony. Do you think this is more advantageous or more disadvantageous?
Nowadays, people are keenly interested in having more privacy. A section of
society
emphasizes that newly constructed Use synonyms
houses
ought to have private outdoor space Use synonyms
such
as a garden, balcony, or yard. Linking Words
However
, it has both positives and negatives.
On the constructive part, Linking Words
society
is blessed with numerous benefits of the presence of new buildings with personal outdoor Use synonyms
areas
which are worth mentioning. Use synonyms
To begin
with, having a personal garden reap the benefits, which help the Linking Words
society
to spend their leisure time in the green area. Use synonyms
As a result
, people feel more relaxed as they can recover after a hard-working day, and Linking Words
also
it has a substantial contribution to a children’s discharge of energy. As an instance, around the past decade in Iran, the majority of Linking Words
houses
had yards, children were playing there; Use synonyms
therefore
, everything was under the family’s supervision, and children were Linking Words
also
enjoying themselves without any danger. Linking Words
Secondly
, Linking Words
society
gets interested in planting to make their area brilliant, so Use synonyms
this
improves the air quality of the community.
On the destructive part, there appears to be a potential shortcoming from Linking Words
this
trend. Chiefly, as the population is growing dramatically, to maintain Linking Words
houses
with private yards or gardens, many lands are needed, and Use synonyms
this
has detrimental effects on the environment. To clarify, scientists are trying to invent methods to prevent environmental changes, while Linking Words
this
is completely against that since it leads to more deforestation. Linking Words
Additionally
, proper maintenance of these Linking Words
areas
has a catastrophic effect on the usage of water. As an example, suburban Use synonyms
areas
in Tehran, where the population is not even half of Tehran, have a double usage of water, since all their Use synonyms
houses
have private yards and gardens.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
construction of Linking Words
houses
with personal outer spaces is benefited considerably, these Use synonyms
areas
lead to major detrimental effects on the environment and climate changes, which are vital human issues.Use synonyms
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