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Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

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It is sometimes believed that minors should only play at home until they are
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 the verge of adulthood while some are of the opinion that schooling should commence as early as possible.
This
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.
To begin
,
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 of
ones
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 developmental
milestones
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 is one of the numerous advantages of
this
 development.
This
 is because the
school
 environment is
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quite
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quiet
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 different from that of home and is purposely structured for learning through various means. At the learning
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, children are
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 healthy competition with their fellow classmates and
this
 enhances brain development as well as
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 them able to perform a task
that is
 expected of their age bracket. To illustrate, my little nephew who was giving birth
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on the 6th of December 2020 had difficulty with speech as he could only mumble some words but two weeks after he was enrolled in the
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 section of the Good Shepherd nursery
school
 John became fluent with words.
Moreover
, one cannot only attain an expected milestone but can as well learn how to socialize with people who are not family members. Children are
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 by nature and would only
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 to be attended to by their immediate family members if not only by their mothers
this
 is because
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 the baby has developed trust
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 them as they are his
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caregivers
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care givers
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.
Thus
, starting
school
 in time gives them the opportunity to see other toddlers and
nteract
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interact
 with them as socialization gives room for
further
 learning. In conclusion, though some people think that children should be given time to vibe at home and start
school
 later. While
this
 might not be totally out of place, I think there are valuable benefits associated with early
school
 enrollments.
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