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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #parents #children #members #society #school #place
Many
families
 teach their
children
 about
a
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conducting that how to be a good citizen which is accepted by other
people
 around them. While, some parents fail to teach them,
so
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they assign these
duties
 to a
school
 for teaching. In the following paragraph, a reason to support my opinion will be discussed. When the
children
 were born, after that, the
first
 thing which
families
 do for their
children
is take
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 care
by
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 focusing.
then
 they have the
duties
 of teaching about living when the
children
 were grown. During the time before studying,
this
 is an essential time to teach them before they participate with other
people
 whom they do not know
such
 as a fundamental of the living and eating, how to be an attractive person which other
people
 want to talk together.
Although
 the teaching from the parents is significant living in a community, the learning in the
school
 is
similarly
 essential living too. The best thing, which the
children
 can learn, is the living with other
people
such
 as the other students in the same
school
 so they can learn about how to interact with other
children
, responsibility is a skill which they can learn in the class by teachers assign homework to them and
finally
, they can learn about a penalty when they not following a rule which is a regulation in
school
. In conclusion, these two methods for learning about the good citizen have benefits in various ways. In my opinion, before the
children
 will go to
the
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school
, the
families
 have the
duties
 for basic teaching, after that, the
duties
 for teaching is not only the family but
school
 which have many the teacher
also
 must teach them about the living in the other ways that the
families
 cannot teach.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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