The quality of life in large cities is worsening what could be reasons behind this. What measures can be taken to resolve this problem

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It is argued that living

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in big

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are

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worse than in small

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will explain

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how to increase urban

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happiness.

People

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in metropolitan

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are less socialized

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other than in villages. Humans behaviour is must be well interacted with another

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to share their happiness and sadness, and

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in who live in

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cities

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have small chances to meet each other because of their job and their

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utility

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cities

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8am to 5pm and sometimes got the extra time work, so when they

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home they got exhausted and do not meet each other.

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social connection in big

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life

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each other is a key to

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for

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who live in big

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People

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who get depressed ,usually in big

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need to share their

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someone else. One of the

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the government must provide facilities for

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in Singapore, they have many parks in every corner of

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meet

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each other and get

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from their job.

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facilities,

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increase

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quality

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of life for urban

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. In conclusion, to increase living

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in big

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, there must be a place for

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meet

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each other and get socialized, so they can refresh from their job or

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routinely

that depressed them.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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The quality of life in large cities is worsening what could be reasons behind this. What measures can be taken to resolve this problem

Your opinion

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission outweighthe diadvantages ?

In these modern days, some people believe that everyone should have access to schools and universities, regardless of their economic backgrounds. In this essay, I will explain the reasons why I fully agree with the opinion.

In many countries, the rate of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with this?