Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays,
telecommunications
and travelling through the sky strongly increase around in the world .However
, there are some disagreements about these technologies has been positive and negative . I am strongly in agreement as the positive effects made by Air travel and telecommunications
actually outweigh to mentioned drawbacks.
On the one hand , it can be spotted that by increasing telecommunications
, people
dismember external life
. Firstly
, this
suggests that people
may become too dependent on them and would not be able to do anything or solve their current problems. Secondly
, Air travel may affect ecology by aeroplane duel. This
problem gradually should be a huge global problem. Besides
, my grandparents used to send letters to each other in the past in order to communicate as there was no other devices or any internet connection. As a result
, it took more than a week for those letters to be delivered and some of their letters were lost during the delivery. Nevertheless
, there are some positive effects to rise travelling and telecommunications
that they make humansʼ life
faster and easier and determine the quality of life
. The main most important advantage of that people
enables to see in the world. This
will definitely make people
more comfortable . It would certainly be sobering to assert that by developing air travel , the government more benefits. Therefore
, the government pays attention to this
field.
To sum up, although
people
can become too dependent to live the easy life
with developed ways to contact the ones . I strongly believe their advantages far outweigh the disadvantages , because they improve humansʼ lives by making .Submitted by uluga2002 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
