Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

It is often argued that

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are brutal and should be shut down, whereas others think that wildlife reserves are practical for conserving endangered

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. While I think that

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are necessary for protecting and preserving endangered

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believe that it is an abuse of animal rights. On the one hand, the majority of the wildlife reserves protect the

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which are about to go extinct by giving them the care they need

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and providing them with the nutrients which are necessary for growth and development.

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,

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conserve threatened

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by assisting in breeding programs by measuring the hormone levels and reproductive period. A compelling example

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is the panda of Singapore. Pandas having small reproductive windows require human intervention to procreate

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and are likely to go extinct without human assistance. With the help of the zookeepers and vets, two pandas have been bred successfully in Singapore.

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, holding

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in captivity is unethical. It is a breach of animal rights for people to use

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for entertainment purposes or for making

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should be happily roaming in the wild

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of being ill-treated and locked in cages.

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, as they are being confined in a small space, they do not have much space to move around, and

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lack of exercise can cause physical and mental health disorders. Research has found that 60% of

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die within the

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2 years on arrival to

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due to depression and psychological health problems. In conclusion,

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safeguard and conserve threatened

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by providing the essential care they need, I strongly think that holding

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in captivity is inhumane and

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should be closed down.