You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home happened, which means that you must change the date of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain the important event • apologize for the situation • suggest a new arrangement

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Dear John, I hope you'

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been well. I am writing to let you know that I was very happy to visit you soon but my sister's marriage has been held on the same day I am coming to your city. Unfortunately, I would not be able to make it. I'

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been waiting for time for so long and now I am full of excitement as I can't wait to enjoy

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ceremony. There will be a large number of guests at home so I have to make arrangements for them. I should be here at her special moment

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she will not talk to me as I am her only brother

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. I'd like to apologize for not making it. I know you were over the moon as we'

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not been in touch as we both were busy with our office work. I'

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planned to visit you as you know already but suddenly I got

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good news from my family. So I need to stay here till that day. Could you let me know of another time you will be free? It is a generous offer to put me up at your place. I would like to come as soon as my sister's engagement is done. See you soon. Jack

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Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity and coherence. While you have done well overall, the second and third paragraphs could be merged as they both focus on the reason for the change in plans.

Task Achievement

While you have covered the key points in the task, be more specific about the new arrangements when suggesting a rescheduled visit. Mention potential dates or a range of dates you would be available.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

211 words

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