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Animal testing for scientific reasons is still very common today. For some

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the harm

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does not justify the experimentation. Others see it as

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is a very difficult situation but that there are some alternatives. It is normal for new medicines

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tested on

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so that we know that the medicine is safe before it is used on

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is justified as without it many medicines would not

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today.

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, there are others who argue that in

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case it even is not justified and that

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are very different to

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so the tests are not useful. Another type of testing is for cosmetics. Because lots of beauty

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are still tested on

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is not just and we do not need to make

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suffer like

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and still make similar

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. There are some alternatives to testing

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animals

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. Some scientists develop new ways

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using cells. Many

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argue that these ways are good but that there is no animal cruelty. in

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I would argue that animal testing for medicinal purposes could be

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if there is no alternative. The medicine may save lots of

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dying. Animal testing for beauty

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is not acceptable and we should have new ways of

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

253 words

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this a positive or negative development?

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some people argue that because the internet make it so easy for children to access facts, schools should not focus on teaching facts. instead they should focus on developing children's skills and potential, and their relationships with other people. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while other think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that competitive sports such as soccer can help to reach cultural interaction among people of different age groups and nationalities, but others think that it would cause problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Traditional schooling is out of date, boring and stifles a child’s natural talents, various professionals have pushed for an education revolution. Are there alternatives in the education system? Is traditional education doing more harm than good?