In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Nowadays, there are many countries where fat
people
becoming more and more and they are doing less fitness than ever, so their levels of health are decreasing. I think that it caused a consuming more male and only one way,
such
a falling wealth of consume can influence to
this
effect.
Firstly
, I would like to talk about the reasons. The
first
reason is excessive consumption. The
people
eat more than early. Various kinds of
food
with special favours are attractive to buy and eat. So
people
can not resist the goodies. They eat even they a full. The
second
reason is
food
composition. Today's
food
consists, mainly, of fats and carbohydrates. They promote gaining weight. The
people
mostly eat fatty dishes. The
last
reason is a sedentary lifestyle. Most
people
work sitting and do not do
sport
.
Accordingly
, the
food
is not digested, which will lead to weight gain. And what need to do to stop
this
tendency? In my opinion, is necessary to propaganda active and healthy life,
also
sport
. The community, which take care of other's life need to encourage to do
sport
. Sports centres need to reduce the price to more
people
go to the gym.
Moreover
, should promote diets and reduce fat eats. Need to learn children at school about harmful of fast foods and more talk about healthy meals. At least need to reduce to produce cheap harmful meals and try to sell more useful products. In conclusion, I think that it depends on
people
themselves. They need to learn to be mo conscious and consume only by necessity. And sure, to do more
sport
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • physical activity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • exercise
  • unhealthy diet
  • fast food
  • urbanization
  • modernization
  • stress
  • awareness
  • education
  • government intervention
  • policies
  • promotion
  • sports
  • fitness programs
  • health education
  • taxation
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • parks
  • recreational spaces
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