We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that we have
Correct your spelling
not
no
enough ability to give everyone around the world a hand. I somewhat agree with the viewpoint because there are many Correct your spelling
not
people
need
help Correct pronoun usage
who need
beside
us; Change preposition
besides
however
, we cannot ignore the overseas people
who also
need others’ help.
The main reason why I believe people
should help their neighborhood
or Change the spelling
neighbourhood
countries
rather than other countries
because
it is the most direct approach to assist others. The public can give homeless Add a missing verb
is because
people
, stray dogs and alley cats food near their house
. Fix the agreement mistake
houses
In addition
, teaching children and looking after elderly people
in rural areas are also
a good way
to help others. Fix the agreement mistake
ways
For example
, the government promote many schemes that the younger and
students can help Correct word choice
apply
people
who live remotely in a systematic way. This
can significantly narrow the gap between urban cities and rural areas.
On the other hand
, helping other countries
is also
a worth thing need
to be deserved. When our government give other Change the verb form
needs
countries
some health resources
, food resources
and clothes resources
etc. It means our country
is prosper
so that we can assign Change the verb form
is prospering
resources
to them. Nevertheless
, it builds the relationship between our country
and other countries
. For example
, Japan experienced huge
earthquake in 2011, Taiwan was the Add an article
a huge
the huge
first
country
, which gave them a
big help, Correct article usage
apply
such
as water, food, money. Now, Japan and Taiwan maintain an excellent relationship.
In conclusion, people
who need help exist worldwide. Even though help
other Wrong verb form
helping
countries
is a friendly thing, I still believe that we need to put more attention on our communities and country
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