Many people argue that zoos where creatures are contained in artificial enclosures should be banned in this century. Are you agree or desagree

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should be banned in

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century.

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essay totally agrees with

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statement because it is cruel to keep an animal in a confined space, and nature programs allow us to view animals without the need for a zoo. The

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reason that animals should not be

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in an artificial and closed building is that it is inherently cruel treatment.

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is because, when the animal can not live free, in their natural habitat, they suffer and are exposed to several injuries, pain and discomfort, just for the human enjoy.

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, there is evidence that

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living in captivity, suffer serious adaptation issues,

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may suffer depression, may have problems

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, among other problems in their quality of life. The

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main reason is that we have access to high quality documental and movies in

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, at the comfort of our home, about anything related

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and animal in general. In these programs, people can learn about research on animal habits, their natural environment, how they feed, where they live, even how they died.

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, the BBC recently produced a series called Life in the Undergrowth which allowed us to understand the lives of insects in stunning high definition. In conclusion, it is unnecessary

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confined

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, there are many programs shows to learn about creatures and nature without the need for a zoo.