We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is true that we do have not enough ability to give everyone around the world a hand. I somewhat agree with the viewpoint because there are many
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who need help
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us;
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, we cannot ignore the overseas
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who
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need others’ help. The main reason why I believe
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should help their neighbourhood or
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rather than other
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is that it is the most direct approach to assist others. The public can give homeless
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, stray dogs and alley cats food near their houses.
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, teaching children and looking after elderly
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in rural areas are
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good ways to help others.
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, the government promote many schemes that students can help
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who live remotely in a systematic way.
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can significantly narrow the gap between urban cities and rural areas.
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, helping other
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is
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a worth thing that needs to be deserved. When our government give other
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some health
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, food
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and clothes
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etc. It means our country is prospering so that we can assign
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to them.
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, it builds the relationship between our country and other
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.
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, Japan experienced a huge earthquake in 2011, Taiwan was the
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country, which
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them big help,
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​as water, food, money. Now, Japan and Taiwan maintain an excellent relationship. In conclusion,
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 who need help exist worldwide. Even though helping other
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 is a friendly thing, I still believe that we need to put more attention on our communities and country
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global interconnectivity
  • international cooperation
  • ethics
  • moral obligation
  • geographical borders
  • diplomatic relations
  • economic stability
  • global security
  • resource allocation
  • expertise
  • international aid
  • dependency and development
  • sustainable solutions
  • local and global initiatives
  • community resilience
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