Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
over the past few decades,
change
has been ubiquitous. While
some sections of society would rather stick to their daily routine, others embrace it with open hearts. Although
the arguments on both sides are valid, I vehemently support the latter group.
To commence with, enormous importance has been laid on continuing to do the same routine, such
as a vast proportion of society finds comfort in familiarity and holds that change
would generate uncertainty as well as
instability, moreover
, they might be frustrated when facing unknown circumstances. For instance
, an individual who was born and raised in a certain neighbourhood decides to move abroad, and would probably get a panic attack in the new country. Nonetheless
, less stress levels along with
less anxiety a human being faces if sticking to the same routine.
There is also
the flipside, where a countless ratio of folks welcome change
. Indeed, a fundamental cause for this
is that change
would further
bring new opportunities and possibilities for growth. This
happened to me two years ago when I resigned from my career and started to work as a content creator, due to
this
decision, not only did my monthly income double but also
worked flexible hours. Consequently
, moving out of my comfort zone would result in improving my life situation.
To conclude
, given the scenario above, everything can be recapitulated into the fact that, nowadays change
is inevitable. some segments of walks of life prevent change
due to
the uncertainty and fear of the unknown, however
, others discover new opportunities and innovation in change
, which sounds perfectly sensible to me.Submitted by maryam.niknamm on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure a clear and consistent progression of ideas throughout the essay, avoiding mixing arguments for and against within the same paragraph. Each main point should have a separate paragraph.
Coherence & Cohesion
Include a more precise thesis statement that clearly addresses the prompt and outlines the direction of the essay. The introduction should set the stage for the discussion.
Task Achievement
Support main points with specific examples. General statements are not as effective as concrete, detailed examples and explanations illustrating each argument.
Task Achievement
Strive to cover all aspects of the prompt evenly. The argument for maintaining the status quo is less developed compared to the argument for change. Equal treatment of both sides of the argument leads to a more balanced discussion.