Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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A number of people argue that it is better for
boys
and
girls
to get an education from different
schools
,
while
others believe that it is more beneficial for
children
if they attend combined
schools
.
Although
studying in separate
schools
will help
boys
and
girls
to focus more on their
studies
, I believe learning from co-educational institutions will help them to become more social in society. On the one hand, when
boys
and
girls
attend separate
schools
, they will spend more time focusing on their
studies
.
This
is because there will not be any opposite gender to be attracted to and to get involved in any affairs. The schooling hours will be fully utilised to learn something rather than being diverted from
studies
and spending time with the ones they might have affairs with within the
school
.
For example
, in Nepal, students from St. Mary’s
Girls
School
showed better academic performance than the
girls
who completed their
school
years at a co-educational institution.
However
, I believe that
children
attending mixed
school
will learn to be more social in the future.
On the other hand
, co-education is more beneficial for
children
because they will learn some social skills during their
school
years.
This
is to say that
children
of both genders will be allowed to have combined
studies
and will learn how to deal politely with a person of the opposite sex, an important skill which is highly accepted by society.
For example
,
boys
who finished their
studies
at co-educational
schools
showed more courtesy towards ladies by offering some help when required.
For
this
reason, it is better for
children
to attend mixed
schools
as it helps them to learn essential social skills. In conclusion,
although
educating
children
in separate
schools
will help them to focus on their
studies
, I believe that co-education is much better for
girls
and
boys
as they will learn essential social skills in
school
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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