Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always good. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Changing or still being like always,
this
is a complex topic. People
are divided into two groups, support change in life
or oppose it. In my opinion, changing in life
is essential for every individual.
On the one side of the argument, people
believe that in modern life
persons can not be like or even live in past years. The best-known of this
example it’s about technology. Technology advances rapidly, and if people
don’t adapt themselves to the new situation, they are stuck in a timeline. The
90s or 2000s boys and girls are well-known examples. They can not relate to the new generation and understand their lifestyle. Apart from Change preposition
In the
this
aspect, sometimes changing is essential, for example
, people
haven’t enough confidence or are not fulfilled with their job. People
can not keep on this
way; they require a thoughtful decision (not outward changes) to change their personality because they will become more satisfied if they do it.
On the other side, people
never believe in changing as means for a better life
because of fear. People
tend to get stuck in their comfort zone because they may get anxious and lose control outside of this
circle. Another reason is the current situation, in which job-for-life
is disappearing, and the economic crisis may arise. Therefore
people
tend to stay in their position and do not change even in vital concepts such
as exercise for improved longevity.
In conclusion, both sides of people
have reasonable reasons for their decision although
those in favour of people
who support the idea of changing I should say they are right because humans need to break the monotony of life
and changing is necessary for our life
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