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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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All automobiles, buses, and lorries will be autonomous in the future. Passengers will be the only ones riding in
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 service. As ı consider,
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 situation is going to make population lazier in terms of using brain function and physical activities which is why the disadvantages of robotic service outweigh the advantages.
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 of all,
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 services are used by artificial intelligence so they don’t need any human effort.
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, when a person drives a car while they have to focus on the street, they
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 have to control whole complicated systems of cars. That means, they
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 their brain with some physical facilities when they
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 these transport but they won’t need these things if
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 transportation come true.
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, since they will constantly wonder whether the artificial intelligence will make a mistake they will be under stress because they cannot control their own safety.
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 will put pressure on them.
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, no matter how little individuals
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 their bodies while they drive vehicles.
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, while they move their feet and arms, they
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 their muscles. Once
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 gets used to
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 comfort, they won't be as active as they used to be. By means,
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 cars destroy even
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 little human effort.
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 it makes
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 less tired, these will have negative effects on human life. In conclusion, as a
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 becomes more and more lazy day by day, these tools will affect
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 even worse.
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driverless
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 cars are so comfortable, human beings have to be more active in their daily life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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