Few countries think that people aged below 30 can do things like vote for country, marriage, getting driving license etc… while most of the countries oppose. What do you think ?

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue whether of
youth
below 30 could vote for the election or not. In
this
essay, I will explain why the
youth
factor is vital, compared with its disadvantage. The merit of the
youth
factor is apparent.
Firstly
,
Youth
contributes to a huge workforce in a country; their economic contribution is countless.
For example
, Most democratic countries like India made
people
under 30 have the right to vote. To add to it, A survey was conducted by the University of Melbourne among the Australian workforce found that 90 % of the labour are youths and the rest 10 % were mid-aged
people
.
Thus
it becomes clear that
youth
should be given the opportunity to select their leader as well as get their car license before the
age
of 30.
On the other hand
, most teens cause serious damage to society.
For instance
, most of the drunk and drive cases are reported in young
people
below '30s.
As a result
of it, most of the fines were issued to teens.As a consequence, It
also
decreases their immigration chances. To add to it, A survey was conducted by the University of Sydney among accident victims found that 90 % of
people
insisted the government raise the
age
for driving licence and the rest 10 % suggested a different approach. It becomes apparent that a driving licence should be issued to young
people
after a certain
age
. To summarise, Having considered both views, I think the advantages of
youth
getting their rights early has the upper hand over the disadvantage.
Also
, I would suggest that all countries should mandate youths to get their rights before the
age
of 20 which I believe is soundly based on the above reasoning I have presented.
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