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Few countries think that people aged below 30 can do things like vote for country, marriage, getting driving license etc… while most of the countries oppose. What do you think ?

#countries #people #vote #country #marriage #license #etc…
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There has been much discussion revolving around the issue whether of
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 below 30 could vote for the election or not. In
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 essay, I will explain why the
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 factor is vital, compared with its disadvantage. The merit of the
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 factor is apparent.
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,
Youth
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 contributes to a huge workforce in a country; their economic contribution is countless.
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, Most democratic countries like India made
people
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 under 30 have the right to vote. To add to it, A survey was conducted by the University of Melbourne among the Australian workforce found that 90 % of the labour are youths and the rest 10 % were mid-aged
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.
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 it becomes clear that
youth
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 should be given the opportunity to select their leader as well as get their car license before the
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 of 30.
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, most teens cause serious damage to society.
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, most of the drunk and drive cases are reported in young
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 below '30s.
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 of it, most of the fines were issued to teens.As a consequence, It
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 decreases their immigration chances. To add to it, A survey was conducted by the University of Sydney among accident victims found that 90 % of
people
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 insisted the government raise the
age
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 for driving licence and the rest 10 % suggested a different approach. It becomes apparent that a driving licence should be issued to young
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 after a certain
age
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. To summarise, Having considered both views, I think the advantages of
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 getting their rights early has the upper hand over the disadvantage.
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, I would suggest that all countries should mandate youths to get their rights before the
age
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 of 20 which I believe is soundly based on the above reasoning I have presented.
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