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Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small number of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In the Contemporary era, Languagers are more important to communicate with the
people
. But some
languages
 are in danger of losing their integrity because they were spoken by a very small number of
people
 in rural areas. Some
people
 say that governments should spend public
money
 on saving those
languages
, while others believe that it would be a waste of
money
. Here I would like to share my views on both ends on the
first
 hand,
Language
 is the weapon to share knowledge and ideas.
In all
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 over the world, there are more than a thousand
languages
 which were in usage till now. But few
languages
 are become extinct due to less usage in small villages and few
people
 and
also
 these are not recognised by state or country. Government should take steps to make popularise knowledge like adding one as a subject in the schools and colleges and giving an opportunity to speak in local
language
 in interviews. Apart from
this
, there are many ways to introduce a new
language
 to
people
.
On the other hand
, The world is existing with many famous
languages
. Taking out an unfamiliar
language
 giving support to it is not a good idea. it is a waste of time and
money
also
.
instead
 of using the
money
 for those of type
languages
. Government should give a path to introduce English medium schools from Elementary to High School.
This
 makes all the children be familiar with the English
language
 they will get the best career in the future. To Sum,
i
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 would like to say that
languages
 are the god's gifts to share feelings and knowledge with one another. Government should not waste utilize on those.
instead
 of introducing English ,variants it may give good opportunities to the children as well community.
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