With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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it provides advanced facilities which help humans to live longer. Due to

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the number of aged

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is increased. Society can tackle

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through

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advanced technologies and

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support. I am going to discuss the reasons how

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can be achieved.

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of all, we need to identify the average number of family

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, and the number of old

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in a family. Because by doing

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we can estimate how many

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of that family have to take care of their older

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, if there are 6

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mostly parents or

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grandparents

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grand parents

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are the oldest ones who need care. Younger ones can divide the responsibilities turn by turn

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,

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will not burden an individual al alone in a family. The

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reason is, mostly the

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make arrangements to cater

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problem like in my country there are old age homes where the elder

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spent their life with basic facilities. By

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means the issue of disowning the elder person of the family is resolved to some extent and medical facilities are

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provided by the

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reason would be increased value by

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I am as a person gets older and older the respect provided them is increased.

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as in Pakistan, it is in culture to respect your elders and live with them until their final departure. By

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the major problem of caring for these

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is reduced. To put

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a nutshell,

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can resolve the issue of the increase in the elder population by ensuring equal responsibilities by every member of the family and

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respective behaviour with elders. The

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to make arrangements for those who are disowning. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the problem lies with family

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and the

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