With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As the health sector is establishing day by day,

hence

it provides advanced facilities which help humans to live longer. Due to

this

the number of aged

people

is increased. Society can tackle

this

through

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advanced technologies and

government

support. I am going to discuss the reasons how

this

can be achieved.

First

of all, we need to identify the average number of family

members

, and the number of old

people

in a family. Because by doing

this

we can estimate how many

members

of that family have to take care of their older

members

.

For example

, if there are 6

members

mostly parents or

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grandparents

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grand parents

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are the oldest ones who need care. Younger ones can divide the responsibilities turn by turn

thus

,

this

will not burden an individual al alone in a family. The

second

reason is, mostly the

government

make arrangements to cater

this

problem like in my country there are old age homes where the elder

people

spent their life with basic facilities. By

this

means the issue of disowning the elder person of the family is resolved to some extent and medical facilities are

also

provided by the

government

. The

third

reason would be increased value by

this

I am as a person gets older and older the respect provided them is increased.

Such

as in Pakistan, it is in culture to respect your elders and live with them until their final departure. By

this

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the major problem of caring for these

people

is reduced. To put

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a nutshell,

people

can resolve the issue of the increase in the elder population by ensuring equal responsibilities by every member of the family and

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respective behaviour with elders. The

government

to make arrangements for those who are disowning. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the problem lies with family

members

and the

government

.