With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As the health sector is establishing day by day,
hence
it provides advanced facilities which help humans to live longer. Due to
this
the number of aged
people
is increased. Society can tackle
this
through
the
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advanced technologies and
government
support. I am going to discuss the reasons how
this
can be achieved.
First
of all, we need to identify the average number of family
members
, and the number of old
people
in a family. Because by doing
this
we can estimate how many
members
of that family have to take care of their older
members
.
For example
, if there are 6
members
mostly parents or
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grand parents
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are the oldest ones who need care. Younger ones can divide the responsibilities turn by turn
thus
,
this
will not burden an individual al alone in a family. The
second
reason is, mostly the
government
make arrangements to cater
this
problem like in my country there are old age homes where the elder
people
spent their life with basic facilities. By
this
means the issue of disowning the elder person of the family is resolved to some extent and medical facilities are
also
provided by the
government
. The
third
reason would be increased value by
this
I am as a person gets older and older the respect provided them is increased.
Such
as in Pakistan, it is in culture to respect your elders and live with them until their final departure. By
this
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the major problem of caring for these
people
is reduced. To put
in
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a nutshell,
people
can resolve the issue of the increase in the elder population by ensuring equal responsibilities by every member of the family and
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respective behaviour with elders. The
government
to make arrangements for those who are disowning. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the problem lies with family
members
and the
government
.
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