Some people believe that purpose of education should be helping the individual to become useful for society, while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their ambitions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
the eduction is the most essential for our life, some societies believe it helps to build their community and others in their environment.
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, learning helps societies to prepare and create more people to improve their community.Linking Words
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