Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

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full of competition,

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one each other to serve their needs.

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the law or event into

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commit or become

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criminals

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after serving their

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punishment.

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happening and provide some cause and solution in the upcoming paragraphs.

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in

crimes

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prison in order their responsibility cause of

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or abuse to another.

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leads to

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about

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criminal skills from

another prisoner

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.

Finally

, there are two solutions to address offenders do not repeat their

crimes

.

Firstly

,

people

in the prisoner should get training skills or knowledge that ensure useful to get a job after their service was finished.

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can provide

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training in craftmanship or repairing engineering

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or beneficial to them after release into real life and provide a better ability in their work.

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the

people

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the bank

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bank

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can provide

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credit

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low

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rate for those

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clear that

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or commit

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crimes

because of

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lack

skills

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to support their life. The government can take action to prevent

people

repeat

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repeating

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as

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an offender

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offender

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by providing training and giving financial support to run their business when back to

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society.