At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many countries have a large
number of
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younger
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the younger
population
compared to older Fix the agreement mistake
populations
people
. This
can be the reason for the lifestyle people
tend to follow and weather conditions as well. I believe that,
younger Remove the comma
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population
have many benefits of having a wide range to
knowledge and information but when it comes to Change preposition
of
the
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life
experiences older population
are well mature than the younger one
. And reasons will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
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ones
Firstly
, due to globalisation, many companies and organisations required younger youth to start their professional life
and lead the company to the top because the reason for hiring younger employees
is that they are well focused, enthusiastic and more adaptive. For an
example, younger Correct article usage
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employees
are more flexible and tend to adopt
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adapt
any
situation or working environment very conveniently. Change preposition
to any
Moreover
, they can travel to different countries or cities on a regular basis for the
business purposes as well. So companies and organisations find Correct article usage
apply
this
very beneficial for their company's economical growth and developments.
However
, there are many companies and organisations still
appreciate their older Correct pronoun usage
that still
employees
which are well experienced and as well educated as well. Younger employees
can be faster and quicker than older people
but when it come
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take
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taking
the
wise decision older Correct article usage
apply
people
can deal with the situation very maturely and wisely. For instance
, it is always observed by many that in the department of business development and marketing area younger people
are always the first
priority to be appointed but when it comes to the management, every company has older and well-experienced employees
who can take problem-solving and mature decisions. I personally believe that it is always necessary to have older people
in our life
.
To sum up, having a younger population
can lead the nation very quickly and adapt
new technologies and techniques but it can't be avoided to Correct your spelling
adopt
having
well matured and well experienced older Change the form of the verb
have
population
who has more life
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...