Some people think exposure to modern technology at an earlier age is good for children, while others claim that it is harmful for their development. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some masses believe that it is the best idea for

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to familiarise themselves with cutting edge

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in their starting

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their life whereas others are of the opinion that

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trend will create an impact on their development. In

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essay ahead I will discuss both the point of view and my opinion leans strongly towards the

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thought as in the upcoming era all required facilities of day to day life will be available in the online medium. On one hand, when individuals come across modern

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in their primary school

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, become experts in that area,

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after a few years, they acquired the master level as youngsters have. These

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all facilities are present by the online medium,

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Covid-19 pandemic provides more opportunities owing to lockdown.

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at that time with the assistance of

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, lots of primary

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gained their knowledge by

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. A recent case study found that because of

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many school

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become experts in most online applications like MS office. They can work independently. On the other side of the rainbow,

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phenomenon has some consequences too. The foremost is exposure to blue light. For using

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, some gadgets are required like laptops, cell phones and many more. While operating these devices they emitted blue-ray light which is dangerous for the eyes of the user. So operating

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device for a long time will certainly damage the overall health of the user. The

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one is when some child uses

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, unknowingly he or she lacks

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verbal communication skills which may affect his personality development. Recently one research in the USA reveals that due to overuse of

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are becoming an introvert and they are busy in the virtual world. To conclude, in the line with the discussion above it is evident that both points of view

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am of the firm stand that exposure of

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to

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in the early

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of their life will be more beneficial for them and society

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