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More and more parents are allowing children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills.

Due to the technological developments, today’s parents tend to allow their
children
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 to
use
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 technological
devices
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such
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 as laptops, tablets, and mobile phones in order to learn skills of technology. In the following paragraphs, both advantages and disadvantages will be discussed. On the one hand,
children
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 playing on computers and tablets tend to have more technical skills than
children
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 who spend time on other things.
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 is because
people
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 in the future are more likely to
use
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 technological
devices
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 to communicate with others than in the past.
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, young
people
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 who usually
use
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 these
devices
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 can be more familiar and learn knowledge from them earlier.
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,
children
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 can
use
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 these technological
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 to find their abilities and their likes by watching and learning positive issues from the Internet.
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, consuming too much on technological tools can be drawbacks for young
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. Since their parents cannot control all of the contents posted on the Internet in which some are sensitive and violent for their
children
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. For
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 reason,
children
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 can be seduced and persuaded into the wrong ways.
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, young
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 can be addicted to playing too much on computers, which can lead to inappropriate behaviour and negative results.
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, my cousin is addicted to computer games, playing around 8-9 hours a day
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 of reading books;
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, he failed in his examination and cannot pass to the
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 level of study. In conclusion, even though there are some positives in technological developments, some negatives can be dangerous and harmful for young
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.
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, both father and mother should limit time and control information for their
children
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 on playing on computers.

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