In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast transport for cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People of some
countries
believe , it is more important to build fast railway
tracts rather than improving the available public transport
to upgrade the efficacy of transport
between cities. Funding that needs to implement such
a big project cannot be done by developed countries
. On the other hand
, improving the available public transport
will be cost-effective and more practical . Due to these reasons , I believe the most practical solution would be , to improve the available public transport
facilities.
To begin
with , building a new railway
system
will cost billions of dollars. actually , the main nations that facing this
transport
problem are developing countries
. however
, fulfilling their resident's other requirements like food, water and houses, they cannot offer this
much money for improving transport
. For example
, the Sri Lankan government try several decades to improve their railway
system
. In fact , they failed due to the unavailability of funds.
On the other hand
, when we consider improving the existing transport
system
it seems to be more practical. actually, The cost will be much less than other big projects and it will consume less time to finish . In the same way, there are new technologies available to reduce traffic congestion and fuel wasting . For example
, a survey done at the University of Monash has found out traffic congestion can be easily tackled by improving the quality of old road systems in developing countries
.
In conclusion , some communities argue about the building of new railway
tracts to improve the public transport
while another part believes in improving the existing transport
system
. while most of the developing nations are unable to fund for new railway
system
and new technology available for improving the other transport
methods , I believe we must invest to improve old public transport
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