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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is to loss of particular species of plant and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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We are living in
the
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 world with kinds of environmental drawbacks. Some individuals believe the extinction of several
animals
 and
plants
 are the most critical
issues
 we face, while others say there are more important problems to consider. Regarding environmental
issues
, I believe
although
,
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 we face
issues
such
 as disappearing some species, we must be aware of some other more important
issues
. humans want to decrease the production expenses, so they have an approach to using non-recycling stuff made from oil derivation. In fact, using these kinds of materials negatively affects our habitat. Discharged plastic bags and water containers in rivers or among the jungle threaten some
animals
 and
plants
 species. In recent years, in the north of Iran, deer died due to eating plastic bags, and some
plants
 are disappeared by the long-term decomposition of plastic stuff. Regarding other nature problems, overpopulation has become a common crisis we faced in our world. In fact, to meet
humans
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 needs, we need more energy and food sources. Providing accommodation for these vast amounts of people needs to collapse jungle and mountains more and more. As far as their food
concerned
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, so many new factories will be founded, and it means that we will have more air pollution and factory wastes in the future, so it isn’t far-fetched that conceived future with lack of natural habitat. In conclusion, it
seem
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 that
although
 some particular
animals
 and
plants
 are affected by environmental problems and no longer lived, there are more vital troubles we face that are directly threatening our survival, so if we want to rescue
animals
 and
plants
, it’s essential to set plan for decrease these drawbacks
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Biodiversity
  • Ecosystems
  • Extinction
  • Climate change
  • Global warming
  • Habitat loss
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Pollutants
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Renewable resources
  • Conservation
  • Deforestation
  • Endangered species
  • Ecological balance
  • Overpopulation
  • Biodegradable
  • Recycling
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Eco-friendly
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