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The pie chart describes information about the populace of Australia from various nationalities and places namely New Zealander,
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, British, Australian and Dutch, units are measured in percentages. Overall, it is clear that the
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's
population
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 is occupied the most in the
city
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 while Australians are least,
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, Australians stay the most in the
countryside
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 while
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 are the least
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 of the
countryside
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. According to the graph illustrates,
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 citizens are lived the most in the
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 side, with three quarters per cent, New Zealander is the
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-largest
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's populace of the Australia which is 90%. British occupied the
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, with 89 per cent, Dutch is 83%, surprisingly, Australians
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 is the least to compare to other nationalities of the
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's
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 in Australia. In terms of the
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, Australian is experienced the highest amount of the
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, which is a fifth and Dutch is the
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-largest
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 of the rural place, with 17%, British is just above a fifth while New Zealanders is one out of ten
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 in the rural location. Surprisingly, only 1% of the
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 stays in the
countryside
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.

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