Some people think that public libraries are necessary while others believe that nowadays public libraries are no longer important. What is your opinion?

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two or three decades,
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' usage has been decreasing tremendously due to the invention of
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technology.
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, some believe that common
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are most crucial and essential while others say that these have been diminishing popularity and
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significant at present. I partially agree with
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statement and that essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, certainly, public
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is of utmost importance because all the population can go study and learn in one place while they can obtain enormous wisdom from
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, these have
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plenty of books and materials not only the local author's books but
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the foreign author' book too,
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, countless students learn for their higher education studies even government exams.
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, Indians always like to go
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for improving their wisdom as well as a plethora of materials are available in one place,
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, they can study without cost.
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, these
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are most crucial.
On the other hand
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, at present, we are living in a modern era while technology is provided
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lot of benefits to us,
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, these parts of common
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are not necessary for studying because all materials and books are available
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platform, so, mankind can get easily without going any
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common
place for use these
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of they can use whenever and
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wherever
.
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, a recent report by the London Times said that more than 70% of the public
libraries
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have closed across the world because humankind does not go there. So, these
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do not need
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a longer period. To conclude, when all things considered, I am convinced that, a library can give a
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of benefits to the population, so, mankind still use more; these cannot be a longer period due to the technology invention.
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, I partially agree with
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statement and I believe that it depends on humankind's choice.
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