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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Residing in a
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 whereby
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 has to communicate in a different
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 can result in substantial social issues apart from practical problems. I completely disagree with
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 statement as I believe humans are created in
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 a way to thrive despite the many hurdles of life and being exposed to a new
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 adds to the ability to pick up a new ability which is important later in life. In the subsequent paragraphs,
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 will elucidate on why it is so.
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,
people
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 entice new
people
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. Their uniqueness somewhat inspires others to want to communicate and understand each other
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, they develop new ways of integrating with each other despite the differences in
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. Some
people
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 use drawings, while others signal another through sign
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 it may seem a little frustrating in the beginning,
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 are forced to accept these complexities of communication and after some time, they learn the basics of the
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, technology has
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 made communicating much easier through applications
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 as Google translator learning a new
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 possible through videos posted on Youtube.
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, acquiring the ability to speak more than
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language
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 is fundamental especially when it comes to applying for a job. Employers are impressed with resumes of an individual who are able to communicate in more languages. Being exposed to a foreign
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 in a foreign
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 enables
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 to learn the
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 of that
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 with ease.
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 will be worthwhile for
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 even after returning back to his homeland as the knowledge stays with him permanently and he will be able to get acquainted with foreigners from the same
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 he was previously in easily.
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, a student who studied in Russia would have no problems communicating with a Russian tourist in his
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 or any Eastern European nation that spoke a similar
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. In conclusion, despite being dumbfounded and not being able to integrate into society easily due to the
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 differences ,in the beginning, I believe that these complications can be eliminated through learning and practice. Social problems can be eliminated through accepting and respecting cultural and traditional differences and
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 is not a barrier to
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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