Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people's health, more and more people are eating it. Why are most people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?

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Over the
last
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two or three decades,
fast
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the fast
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food
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industry has been developing
tremendously
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than ever before due to addictions.
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, countless mankind eats these instant
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across the world, doctors suggest fast
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is not
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good for health.
Affortable
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Affordable
price and
taste
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is
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the main
reasons
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for these situations. There are some possible measures to tackle that problem.
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essay discusses it briefly for the following
reasons
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. There are
main
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two causes for mankind
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to eat
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enormously instant meals. One of the major
reasons
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is that fast
food
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price is very
affortable
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affordable
and cheap
instead
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of cooking at home, so, numerous humankind likes to prefer aforementioned.
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, in McDonald's a burger price is just $5 but if you will cook at home,
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ingredients
ingrediants
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the ingrediants
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cost is higher than buying a burger. Another main reason is that
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, these kinds of fast
foods
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taste
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is
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unique and numerous humankind is addicted rather than homemade
foods
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. These are the main
reasons
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for mankind consumes fast
food
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a lot. There are some possible measures to tackle these problems. One of the possible solutions is that all instant
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companies should be added to their menus which is healthy meals rather than junk
foods
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such
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as salad.
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, in western nation's
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fast-food
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food
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enterprises already has added salad to their menus,
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, enormous people have to eat
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apply
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healthy
foods
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. Another manageable solution is that the government might be increased the tax for these enterprises,
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,
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costs would be raised,
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, people might be eaten homemade meals. These are the manageable solutions for that trend. To conclude, when all things considered, the population likes to eat these
foods
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for
taste
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and low cost . The solution about the thing indicated, increasing the tax and adding healthy menus in hotels.
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