Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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to deal with convicts. While some hold a strong view that putting them in

jail

is not a feasible method, the opposite makes a statement that getting access to studies and training is a better way. While the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself

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an advocate of the latter. On the one hand, it is understandable why many people believe that getting convicts into prison is not an efficient measure. Without a shadow of a doubt, the number of cases

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committing a crime again has been increasing considerably over the

last

decade.

Criminals

are usually surrounded by evils when they are in

jail

so

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their environment has a negative impact on their

behavior

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. Prisoners are able

to

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be induced to participate in many illegal organizations in order to violate the law together.

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, many

researches

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indicated that about 25% of

criminals

continue violating the law after getting out of

jail

. They still do various illegal acts

such

as murdering, kidnapping, robbing…

This

did great damage to society and reduced the government fund significantly.

Therefore

, imprisonment is not the best approach to deal with

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criminals

.

On the other hand

, education and training should put emphasis on

criminals

’ teaching methods.

This

could raise convicts’ awareness about the acceptable

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, law and make them get access to practical experience.

For example

, the government might create more apprenticeship

centers

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for

criminals

so that fruitful knowledge could be provided to them. On top of that, they

also

have an opportunity to be an employer, who could contribute value to society.

Thus

, providing knowledge and training play a vital role in recreating their personalities and making themselves to be a good

citizen

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. In conclusion, putting convicts into

jail

is not a feasible way to deal with them and they should have an opportunity to get access to not only valuable knowledge

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but

also

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training lessons.