some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
"A healthy
people
leads to a healthy nation" so goes the old adage. There is a debate on whether having more sports
facilities
could accord the masses the chance to exercise
in order to improve their health
or if the impact could be minimal since people
can not be forced to engage in some form of exercise
. In my opinion, I believe having more such
facilities
can contribute to better health
.
A few people
consider it an advantage to have many sports
facilities
as this
accords more individuals a chance to exercise
as opposed to only a few of such
. To illustrate, if a country has only got 14 sports
facilities
that can only accommodate 13 people
each meanwhile 50 people
are interested in participating, then
these would miss the opportunity to exercise
unlike if the opposite were true. In other words
, more sports
centres allow a considerable number of people
to fully promote their health
through these means at a larger scale.
On the other hand
, despite the foregoing benefit, some feel this
hardly make any positive impact on the public's health
since they can not be forced into exercising. Regardless of how many sports
facilities
a country might have, the public still has the right to refrain from participating in any of the activities done in these centres. For example
, even if more sports
facilities
were available in a city, this
would have no bearing on improving the public's health
for as long as they are not actively participating in the activities taking place around the sports
centre.
In conclusion, while an increase in the number of sports
facilities
can offer more opportunities to the masses to exercise
and improve their health
, it can not always be the case as these people
can not be forced to exercise
. Henceforth, I personally think the more chances people
get to exercise
, the better their health
can get.Submitted by rawlingskatongo89 on
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