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Some people think that handwriting is no longer important in the modern world and should not be taught in the schools.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Technological advancements have significant impacts on each and every part of human life
specially
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 on the education
system
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Although
, for
this
 reason, handwriting might be thought of as a completely useless skill in some cases and said to be stopped teaching, I completely disagree with
this
 . In
this
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system
 and always should be in practice. Writing by hand is always a very powerful tool to memorize something.When someone reads any new information , it is very difficult to accumulate that instantly. Writing that information by our own hands helps our cognitive
system
 to get familiar with that rapidly and it is a very natural and ancient
system
 to learn.Especially in the time of examinations when students need to load their minds with tons of
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 within a very limited time,handwriting becomes the most effective tool to hone their mind.
However
,it is proven that only reading can not help the learning
system
 as fast as the combination of seeing and writing can do. So, the more we use our fingers to awaken our nerve and cognitive
system
 , the more effective and faster our learning procedures would be and no modern
system
 can compete with that. On top of that,As Handwriting ensures the distinction of a person, it becomes a very significant part of identity.Everyone’s writing has
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 own unique style which is very useful in times of differentiating one person from another ,
for instance
, in times of making
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 identity card or keeping criminal records and so on.
Although
 electronic signatures have been launched,
that is
 not as secure as the ancient handwriting signatures.
Therefore
, Abolishing handwriting completely is not only a threat
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 our distinction but
also
for
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 the security
system
 . One of the most effective ways to keep some practices dynamic is to teach that thing at a young age and schools play the most vital role here.Refraining schools from teaching handwriting would be a drastic decision because children's minds easily catch new things which
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 quite impossible at a later stage. So, the more it is
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 at a young age the more it will help to improvise their skill. In conclusion,
However
, It seems very obvious that with the dynamic flow of time,everything will change .
Thus
, the vanishing of some old practices to welcome the new
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 is acceptable . But, there are
such
 few significant skills like handwriting
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 should always be kept in practice for their irreplaceable usage .
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