The maps below show the changes that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013.
The given maps illustrate seafood vacation
place's
changes in Templeton during Change noun form
places
thirteen-year
period, from 2000 to 2013.
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a thirteen-year
Overall
, it can be seen that,
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this
place had developed and become more industrial and modern over the given period.
According to
the maps, in 2000 seaside
resort of Templeton was Correct article usage
the seaside
Correct article usage
a quite
quite
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quiet
natural
and undeveloped place with a large Add an article
a natural
the natural
quantity
of trees, house apartments and public facilities Change the quantifier
number
such
as school
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schools
hospital
and Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
railway
station, Correct article usage
a railway
while
by 2013 it had significant changes. First of all, the trees had been cut down and modern
factory was built Correct article usage
a modern
insted
of them. Correct your spelling
instead
Moreover
, new
airport had been constructed on the right side of the river and the trees and houses Correct article usage
a new
located
in the south-east part of the area. Another striking change was Add a missing verb
are located
construction
of Add an article
the construction
big
supermarket which is in the north part of apartments and blocks of flats were considerably grew up in 2013. Another notable change was Correct article usage
a big
extension
of Add an article
an extension
the extension
railway
along the coastline. Correct article usage
the railway
Furthermore
, the sea had been some ferry which used for transportation
of cars.Correct article usage
the transportation
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