In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cell phone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?
Nowadays, in many developed
countries
, making payment
for the purchase using mobile apps
is being a kind of more and more popular payment
method. This
essay will argue that despite online payment
attracting more scams and it is not affordable for everyone, paying using mobile apps
create a cashless environment and is convenient for both seller and buyer.
First
of all, there are several online payment
methods available these days by using mobile apps
such
as G pay, Apply pay, Grab pay...etc. A common problem and main disadvantage of this
type of payment
is the scam. Online scam is a high crime rate in most of the countries
that use those types of payment
because making purchase and payment
are too easy and it can happen within a second
. For instance
, the highest crime rate in Singapore in 2020 is online scams. Secondly
, in order to use mobile apps
for payment
, people
need these basic things smartphone, the internet, bank account. Although
these are common items and everyone owned in developed countries
, most people
cannot afford them in poorer countries
.
By contrast
, mobile payments
encourage cashless environments. It improves a lot to our daily life. A past decade ago before smartphones were invented, people
usually carried a lot of cash along with them wherever they go. Sometimes, we faced a shortage of small changes upon our purchase. For example
, in Myanmar, sellers usually give sweets as a returned change when they don't have small coins. Another point of advantage is convenience. Mobile banking and payments
create easier our daily trades. It is just a click away from our hands. For example
, in China, most people
, nowadays, carry less cash. All payments
are mostly paid by a mobile app called Alipay.
In conclusion, however
, mobile apps
payments
are useful and easy for us, there are disadvantages as
a Change preposition
apply
drawback
created by some criminals.Fix the agreement mistake
drawbacks
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