A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Dear Allan, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am overjoyed after hearing that you are thinking to move to Canada from the Philippines especially here in a surrey for your higher studies. I have completed my studies at Kwantlen Polytechnic University. It's

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really a good place to study for a better future. And it has a campus in Surrey. So, if you live with us at Newton, you don't have to travel a lot to get there. You just have to take one bus to go to your university. But, we

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have sky trains here . So it's really easy to go anywhere. I am already living with someone from Manila, Philippines. As you both are from the same city it will be really easy for you to get along with her. I am really excited for you to come here. Please let me know about your itinerary before time. So I have time to arrange things here for you. Yours lovingly Vaani

vaniaulakh

Feb 12, 2022

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