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Some feel that it is a waste of time to plan for the future and it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is considered by some people useless to prepare for
life
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 to come, they believe that
one
 has to focus on what they have at the moment. I moderately disagree with the statement.
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 agree and disagree
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First
 of all,
life
 is
upredictable
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unpredictable
predictable
, no
one
 knows when it is going to end
therefore
 it is wise for
one
 to prepare for
unfoseen
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unforeseen
 circumstances that
life
 can bring.
For example
, it is very important to keep some savings every month after getting paid just in case it is needed tomor,
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Moreover
 preparing oneself for tomor always brings good results than not to prepare anything
although
 it is inevitable not to think about the unknown.
Secondly
, it is so discouraging to prepare yourself for
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 future because the
life
 of a human being is so confusing. For
intance
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instance
, people can save and build investments for
future
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 but only
to
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die before they enjoy the money. Another example is that
one
 can educate him/herself for so many years but soon after qualification they die and leave all the certificates behind,
Thus
 saying, all
this
 is confusing and it is impossible not to think about it but it is better to prepare oneself. To sum up, individuals have to make serious decisions on
thier
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their
 own , on how to tackle up the difficulty of focusing on now or future wherefore l personally think it is good to plan for the coming
life
.
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