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plastic bags ,plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. what damage does plastic do to the environment?what can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

#plastic #bags #bottles #environment #damage #governments #individuals
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The public
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Public
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 concern has risen about the enormous
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 products that have caused the demerit impact
to
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on
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 the
natual
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natural
 environment.
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 issue has attracted not only environmentalist attraction, government level
is evaluate
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this
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 imminent issue.
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 article is going to elaborate effects
toward to
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of
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 our circumstances and discuss how people can do to improve
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 problem in both governmental and citizen aspects. Individuals have found that
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 waste is generated from daily life, including
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bowl
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bowls
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,
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 packages and
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 toothbrushes. As all the
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 material can not be decomposed naturally, there are more and more indecomposable garbage is attacking the plant. Several pictures have indicated the beach are full of trash and even sea turtle ate them accidentally. Even worse, one of the sea turtles'
head
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even
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 stuck and tightened by the
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 cup holder which made some eruptions
at
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in
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neck
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 area.
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, each human is taking steps on reducing the not eco-friendly product and
develop
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developing
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 new
material
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materials
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 to replace
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. At
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national
natoinal
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the natoinal
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 level, governments are negotiating new laws to protect the natural zone and restrict the usage of
the
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apply
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plastic
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 material in products.
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, tolls will be fine for throwing
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plastic
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 trash in the forests.
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, new laws ruled shops that
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 bags are not allowed to provide to customers. People are used to
bring
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 their
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 bags for shopping. Even better, bringing their own tableware is a new trend in the young generation.
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, electrical devices used a bunch of
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 materials to replace the
high cost
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 ones. With the eco-protecting law and the advanced technology of the
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 material can be chosen. The usage of
the
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plastic
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 in
industry
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the industry
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situation
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situations
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 will be improved. In conclusion, the
plastic
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 waste problems acquire not only the government's resolution but
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 every people's environmental awareness.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • ecosystems
  • wildlife
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • strict regulations
  • plastic consumption
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • sustainable packaging
  • recycling facilities
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